Wednesday, October 28, 2009

could someone do the punctuation for this assignment please

could someone do the punctuation for this assignment please?
Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her I believe nursing became a respectable important profession.
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everything looks good to me
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I can. Just email me and I will edit it for you. (:
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services, and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless, heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then, and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing is a respectable and important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany! After the start of the Crimean War soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease! She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front! Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives! Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable! Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian! Thanks to her I believe nursing became a respectable important profession!
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services, and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless, heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then, and later, were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse, hospital reformer, and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable, important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head of all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless, heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable, important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse, hospital reformer, and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services, and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable, important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War(,) soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless(,) heartfelt efforts saved many lives(and) Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse(,) hospital reformer(,) and humanitarian. Thanks to her(,) I believe nursing became a respectable(,) important(,) profession. Commas CAN be placed at the end of the last word in a list so I do. It's not necessary.


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