could someone do the punctuation for this assignment please?
Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her I believe nursing became a respectable important profession.
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everything looks good to me
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I can. Just email me and I will edit it for you. (:
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services, and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless, heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then, and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing is a respectable and important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany! After the start of the Crimean War soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease! She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front! Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives! Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable! Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian! Thanks to her I believe nursing became a respectable important profession!
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services, and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless, heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then, and later, were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse, hospital reformer, and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable, important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head of all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless, heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable, important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse, hospital reformer, and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War, soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services, and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless heartfelt efforts saved many lives. Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse hospital reformer and humanitarian. Thanks to her, I believe nursing became a respectable, important profession.
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Florence Nightingale received her nursing training in Egypt and Germany. After the start of the Crimean War(,) soldiers were dying because of inadequate medical care and rampant disease. She volunteered her services and the minister of war appointed her to head all nursing operations at the front. Her tireless(,) heartfelt efforts saved many lives(and) Her contributions to nursing then and later were invaluable. Florence Nightingale was a nurse(,) hospital reformer(,) and humanitarian. Thanks to her(,) I believe nursing became a respectable(,) important(,) profession. Commas CAN be placed at the end of the last word in a list so I do. It's not necessary.
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Wednesday, October 28, 2009
Wednesday, October 14, 2009
Help!Should I move to Germany
Help!Should I move to Germany ?
I want to move to Germany after I get out of college but my parents said they would get so mad at me of I did because my brother moved there with his wife because she is German.and they never get to see their grandchildren.but I love it in germany and in college I'm taking nursing as my major and German as my minor.I love being there when Im there,I could defenitaly see myself living there.there's kind of a guy involved too. Ohh if it helps I already know intermediate german and still learning from all my family in Germany
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Germany is cool go for it
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yeah then three words. GO FOR IT! i mean i understand your parents want their kids with them but you could explain to them that its your life and you really want to move there. and i agree with you Germany is amazing i love it there too.... good luck! and have fun in Germany!. your parents should def. understand,
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go for it! i'm also moving ot germany after college.. i love it ! even though i dont know much german i'm still going!. question but what part? berlin?
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That is a hard decision. Why don't you get more information on Germany, How many people? Population? What do they do for a living? What type of society is it? How many children do people Have? Get to know your facts. What is the industry there? I would visit for a year or two, Why not? You would have to get immigration there.
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Look, this is YOUR life. You have to do what makes you happy, and only you (unless you have kids, then sorry, it's thier life your stuck till they are gone). But seriously, your parents will get over it, it is time to spread your wings, fly and make a nest of your own. Kudos to you for having a plan and seeing the beauty in another country then your own (not sure where you are, I'm in America and I think Germany is so beautiful). You are on the right path by having a career goal and by already trying to speak the language of the country you want to move too.
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Germany is amazing. I would deff finish college first ;w/o a college degree you will be struggling .Do not move there just for a guy ;also keep in mind the difference between Euro and USD .germany is very nice but living there is very different from visiting ..
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I want to move to Germany after I get out of college but my parents said they would get so mad at me of I did because my brother moved there with his wife because she is German.and they never get to see their grandchildren.but I love it in germany and in college I'm taking nursing as my major and German as my minor.I love being there when Im there,I could defenitaly see myself living there.there's kind of a guy involved too. Ohh if it helps I already know intermediate german and still learning from all my family in Germany
Other - Europe - 6 Answers
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Germany is cool go for it
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yeah then three words. GO FOR IT! i mean i understand your parents want their kids with them but you could explain to them that its your life and you really want to move there. and i agree with you Germany is amazing i love it there too.... good luck! and have fun in Germany!. your parents should def. understand,
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go for it! i'm also moving ot germany after college.. i love it ! even though i dont know much german i'm still going!. question but what part? berlin?
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That is a hard decision. Why don't you get more information on Germany, How many people? Population? What do they do for a living? What type of society is it? How many children do people Have? Get to know your facts. What is the industry there? I would visit for a year or two, Why not? You would have to get immigration there.
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Look, this is YOUR life. You have to do what makes you happy, and only you (unless you have kids, then sorry, it's thier life your stuck till they are gone). But seriously, your parents will get over it, it is time to spread your wings, fly and make a nest of your own. Kudos to you for having a plan and seeing the beauty in another country then your own (not sure where you are, I'm in America and I think Germany is so beautiful). You are on the right path by having a career goal and by already trying to speak the language of the country you want to move too.
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Germany is amazing. I would deff finish college first ;w/o a college degree you will be struggling .Do not move there just for a guy ;also keep in mind the difference between Euro and USD .germany is very nice but living there is very different from visiting ..
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Wednesday, October 7, 2009
Should I move to Germany
Should I move to Germany ?
I want to move to Germany after I get out of college but my parents said they would get so mad at me of I did because my brother moved there with his wife because she is German.and they never get to see their grandchildren.but I love it in germany and in college I'm taking nursing as my major and German as my minor.I love being there when Im there,I could defenitaly see myself living there.there's kind of a guy involved too. Ohh if it helps I already know intermediate german and still learning from all my family in Germany
Other - Europe - 2 Answers
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Yes you should, Germany is so beautiful. Do what would make you happy, not your parents. It's your happiness, not theirs. (:
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No, Germany is full of stupid Nazis.
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I want to move to Germany after I get out of college but my parents said they would get so mad at me of I did because my brother moved there with his wife because she is German.and they never get to see their grandchildren.but I love it in germany and in college I'm taking nursing as my major and German as my minor.I love being there when Im there,I could defenitaly see myself living there.there's kind of a guy involved too. Ohh if it helps I already know intermediate german and still learning from all my family in Germany
Other - Europe - 2 Answers
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Yes you should, Germany is so beautiful. Do what would make you happy, not your parents. It's your happiness, not theirs. (:
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No, Germany is full of stupid Nazis.
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Thursday, October 1, 2009
American Girlfriend immigrating to Europe, qualified as a certified nursing assistant (CNA)
American Girlfriend immigrating to Europe, qualified as a certified nursing assistant (CNA)?
Okay here is my question - my beautiful girlfriend lives in the USA, wants to move to Europe. Germany is a strong possibility, and on top of being a certified nursing assistant, her aunt was born in germany, although they moved to USA with her uncle. I can easily move to Germany as I am a EU citizen, living in England. My question is, what is the easiest way for her, herself to move? Also, are there many areas of Germany which may be accessible for those not entirely fluent in German for jobs and social reasons? Thank you in advance for your responses! <3
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Okay here is my question - my beautiful girlfriend lives in the USA, wants to move to Europe. Germany is a strong possibility, and on top of being a certified nursing assistant, her aunt was born in germany, although they moved to USA with her uncle. I can easily move to Germany as I am a EU citizen, living in England. My question is, what is the easiest way for her, herself to move? Also, are there many areas of Germany which may be accessible for those not entirely fluent in German for jobs and social reasons? Thank you in advance for your responses! <3
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In the wake of security concerns and concerns over terrorism, many countries around the world have tightened their immigration laws to protect their citizens and visitors with legitimate reasons. This has since made it a bit harder to apply for visas for countries in the EU. We offer professional assistance on visa application procedures for the EU. Our experts are equipped with the latest and up to date information on immigration laws, policies and procedures for the EU. Whether you intend to come to any of these countries to for pleasure, visiting friends and family, work, study, marriage or permanent immigration, we would lessen your work load. Our expertise in these matters is second to none. We mainly cover the UK, Germany, France, Spain, The Netherlands, Russia, Austria, Czech Republic, Ireland and many others. Contact us eurovisapro@yahoo.com
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